Feedback on draft video

I had got some feedback on my first video and some ways on which to improve it.

These points will be taken into consideration on my next shoot and edit:

• Show more of a bond between the walker and the dog. Close up shots of eyes and mouths will accomplish this. Also close ups of the dog and walker together (low walking shot).
• The preparation footage at the beginning was a bit too long so the editing of those shots must be tightened up.
• Show the dog doing an activity e.g fetching, swimming etc
• Less static shots.
• Less 'scene setting' shots
• The dogs paw print in the mud (close up shot).